I'm monitoring my behavior. I'm sorry if it is, in fact, poor critiques.
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-12283328/scp-that-makes-everyone-a-call-center-client#post-4337804
Response to a single reply post, and referencing to the locked duplicate thread they did after August 7th. I checked to see other forum posts they did related to this, as to find none. Replied post from Page 29, as locked thread is on 27 (or in later pages after typing this).
This has landed at page 29 without many responses.
I will also refer to your locked thread as an additional reference.
I'm not a butterfly squad member, nor is this is a greenlight. Just my opinion by looking at this.
A memetic computer that prevents the ability to fix the issue or describe it.
A "treasure hunt" to a much bigger threat and information to numerous anomalies, tying to a missing person who was investigating them.
Dumfounds even experts. I can imagine the people sitting there, being clueless.
An external method (like a remote controlled robot) was used by the researcher, perhaps?
These two threads has little information for me to go by, but I suggest a Butterfly squad member will help you develop this idea better than me.
I suggest including your other post by editing this one with that information. This post seems imaginative to me.
Pertaining to mentioning the discovered deleted email archives in your other post, if the emails were sent, the Foundation would have investigated them. If they were never sent, then the emails would be excellent addendum after finding the computer. The missing person may be tied to all of the anomalies or was affected by trying to locating the source of the anomalies.
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-12302681/the-grand-sausage-emporium#post-4337727
Checked for any other post to reference to, but only found his reply to his post. It landed at Page 23.
I noticed this thread fell into page 23, as there was no reviews or responses, as I will review your idea.
This is not a greenlight. I am not a Butterfly squad member. I'm just giving a critique based on my opinion and what I can infer from your post. Just to be clear.
I noticed you described that old Christmas ornaments were found, noting that they might have used Christmas Sausage recipies for the season, possibly telling how long ago the living sausages were first found.
The machinery… I assume sausage processing machinery was there?
The Mobile Task Force (MTF) is the team that raids sites with reported anomalies. It would make sense that if an anomalous item went past screening and infiltrated the Foundation through the normal non-anomalous food supply, that the MTF would take action.
The fact that the squeals from the sausage in the frying is not heat escaping from pressure cracks, but an actual reaction to being fried, well, I use to think sausage screams too when I used the microwave.
I have no opinion about how the Foundation agent was allowed to buy food from an unmonitored store.
PETA is known in the Internet as controversial and do awareness of animal cruelty. Turning dead animals into living creatures and plants, understandable in my opinion. Or this is what the butcher thought the Foundation MTF squad was? I might of read that wrong first.
The sausage squirms and emits strange vocalizations in the frying pan. I would scream and struggle too if I was cooked.
I see you mentioned specific sausage types. I think the brands do relate to what they are, like Applewood is plant based, as Bratwurst are from cattle. Spicy Italian Sausage with burning venom.
The living sausage in a cat carrier gives me deja vu. I like it.
Sausage Safari fits as the store holds an ecosystem under the store. Reminds me of the candy made room in Willy Wonka.
Mentioning the store during the raid, I like the name Sausage Safari… Also what does the store looks like (the inside of the store above the basement)? I never been to a sausage specialty shop before. Put that in the draft.
I suggest the types of sausages be individual SCP-XXXX-# with the behavior and role as an observation. Put that in the draft.
Have a clearer description to what the SCP is, as I assume the ecosystem is the SCP. Or is this a narrative tale? You started with when the anomaly was found, which hooked me.
Mention the MTF as the squad raiding the store, as there are different squads that handle different raids. The squads I suggest : Lambda-14, Psi-8, or Zeta-9.
Is it a crowded basement? Or a basement with crying (crowing) sausages? Either could work as the cries can be traced to their source.
I was typing through a thunderstorm, so I made some final touches to this now as it was further away. No sarcasm is used. Last edit was to fix a misunderstanding on my part. I'm done editing this critique post.
No additional staff or user replies in those threads before this post. I'm not replying to those anymore due to the C&D order. Keeping track of my disc record this time. Review the second reference if you need to.
I asked to keep note of my previous critiques before the recorded post. Here they are. Don't remove my C&D yet. I am still trying to experiment collapsibles inside quotes.
Occasionally check for double posts, as I am unable to do any more critiques.